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Wednesday 26 September 2018

Robots and lollies

Once upon a time there was a staircase on a beach. Then I went up the staircase and I saw some robots making lollies. Suddenly I was in a crunchy bar and the robots were trying to eat me. Finally I robots ate me. 



10 comments:

  1. Fakaalofa lahi atu Tevita. I am David from St Pius X School. I like your story because I can read it.

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  2. Fakaalofa lahi atu. I’m Daniel from St Pius X School. I like your story because it is so real. Keep it up.

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  3. Fakaalofa Lahi atu. Hello my name is Sani and I am from St. Pius X School. I like your work you’ve done because of your title “Robots and lollies.

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  4. Fakaalofa lahi atu and hello. I AM MEELA FROM ST PIUS X SCHOOL. I love your story because it’s colourful and it looks so so beautiful.

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  5. Fakaalofa Lahi atu. I am Anisi from St Pius X School. I enjoyed admiring your picture with the story. Great and interesting picture 👀😊👏

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  6. Fakaalofa lahi atu. l am Pauline from St Pius X School. l like your picture because you are good.
    l am so happy to see your writing because you have an amazing work.

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  7. Fakalofa Lahi atu. I am Audrey from St Pius X School. I like your picture, it is a sunny day. I like the story where you said, robots are going to eat you. Are you thinking of running up the stairs. I think some robots can’t climb your stairs so fast. You can see the �� when you are up on the stairs.

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